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Just when your eyelids get heavy
But you can't fall asleep
Your thoughts tumbling away in your brain
Like clothes in a dryer cycle
The the buzzer goes off
And they stop abruptly falling down to the bottom
With a deep breath
You close your eyes and dream
But your dreams are those same thoughts
Like a rolodex of random images of nonsense and confusion
But surprisingly falling together like a puzzle
Patiently waiting to be solved
When you awake
6.22.08
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Some of these words were just buzzing around my head like a horsefly... So I used the fly swatter and wrote them down.

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:iconcovetseraph:
Hahahaha!!! I can't tell if I like the poem more, or your description of it! lol!
MAN, I need to write.... Hmmm...

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"It can't rain all the time..." -Eric Draven (The Crow)
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oh yeah!!!! you make me feel so good! LOL

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"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, Listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left." Marilyn Monroe
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I'm lovems' you! lol!

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"It can't rain all the time..." -Eric Draven (The Crow)
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Haha id have to agree with CovetSeraph on that. Haha nice description. I wish I more of thoughts buzzing around like flys. Nice, reminds of times when your half asleep. YOu have like quick dreams and you think it actually happening. Your talking out loud that it wakes you up out of the situation you were just in. Thinking, wow I thought that was real.

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"We were around Barstow when the drugs begin to take hold."

RAUL DUKE- Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas

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